TheCon-Sept's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The GWB song]

We love America

Can't say it wasn't bad... for two reasons.... some of the words to the song weren't exactly placed right... when you repeated "I'm gonna go play crazy golf with my dad" twice real fast it messes up the flow of the song...

Anyway.... see this is an example of a flash film that has great content without all the shiny mirrors and colored smoke... simple flash's like this should give an example to all of you people out there with the wrong Idea.... or in the mood to try and give NG a bad name...

[Metal Gear Awesome]

YEAH!

The graphics aren't an A+ but the content is mega 10.... Make a sequal to it.... + I love the look on Snakes face after he shoots the guy in the head "i don't know what happened" with blood on his face.

Make another one!

[The POd:Warning! (teaser)]

Pretty good, not great but pretty good...

I have to admit... seeing what you have developed so far has intrigued me to want to see this flash... 32 days.... I'll be there...

[Hyuuga Neji vs Rock Lee]

its almost like DBZ....

Its a nice cartoon with DBZ like physics but... work on the story a little bit more...

Mini-Speed1 responds:

well you see...i'm not very good at story but i'm good at action and this flash was suppose to be a action movie.

[World of Diablo: Ep 1]

needs work...

OK... First of all no one likes a characters line being quickly scrolled across the screen. It makes it hard to read what they are saying and if we miss one part of it we may not interpret the story correctly.

You don't want to make the introduction text to fly by to fast because most people can't read at the same rate you can. Also fix the begining of the story. the music at the beginning ran off its time end... make sure you end the music and start the music at the appropriate times.

Work on the characters movements too. Like it says in the tutorial, make a new layer for each limb of the person (example: Left leg has its own layer, head has its own layer, and many more layers for items or movement.)

Try to make it so that even if the person has never seen it before to like it.