what happened to the origional sound?
The old FF1 battle mode didn't sound this.... screechy... it gave me a headache. Just keep it simple like my beats.... click on my profile to view my audio section. You could get an idea of what to make in the future.
If music gives you headaches turn down the volume
D D D D n B.... nice
just the first part sounds like a classical piece... you have a nice drum beat. are you sure you didn't download this drum beat? I swear I've heard it before.
The heaviest drumbeat I downloaded from killerbeats.com, it's a nice site, and that beat really caught my taste. I changed it slightly, as I do with every free sample I find.
too many gate effects... but still good 4/5
Listening to this kind of reminds me of when I had a faulty wire in my headphones... there are too many gated traks.... you need to add a part thats liquid... all this gated stuff is giving me a headache....
Heh well I certainly didn't mean to give you a headache. This song is not intended for everyone. It was more of a project I could learn off of to break a barrier I was trying to get through. You'll hear in a song I will soon upload I did experiment more with this sound but different. This was just an ice breaker :) Glad you gave it to me straight though. I can't learn unless I dont get feedback like this so thank you!
~Red 7
Add some tones to the track!
This must be your first time messing around with FL Studiop or FL3... try to add a drumset or at least a melody to the track....
nice melody....
I'm sorry but this is like your previous submission... messing around with a bunch of samples and Sytrus's... Please open up a few tutorials....
USE SOME EFFECTS!
I can definately tell this is Fruity loops work... I'm sorry but this song reminds me of when I first started out with Fruity Loops 3... This is too basic son... take some tutorials in the software man... learn how to add effects and do more than just put in a sample...
Go to my profile and listen to a few of my tracks. All of which were produced in Fruityloops 3- FL Studio 5
It might give you some ideas... but from now on learn how to turn everything inside out.
Nice drum set!
I'd like to have a copy of your drum set... they are way better than what I find....
Most of the drums are actually made with a mix of fx and what came with fl ;)
the other 3 I use though I kinda want to keep for myself so my drums stay unique
Its nice but... too trance like
Its a nice melody but repetitive... I like the drumloop tho... what can I say I make more drumloops than actual tracks... but it would sound alot better if it was recorded from a guitar and a piano instead of what seams to be an orchestra and a harp....
Thanks,
I'm always stuck between a rock and a hard place when it comes to how long my themes should be. If it's too short, people say "Make it longer! Expand on it!". If it's too long, people say "It's too repetitive!" I can't win! :)
BTW, there is a piano in there.
I like your style but the drums need work
You have good rhythm with your guitar but the drum set is off... sounds akward. let me have the guitar part and I'll see what i can do
thanks man... i`ve already sent you the piece...
Better than most...
Nice drumloop. Clear base but it made me feel like I was playing Extreme-G on the N64 on the final level. But his voice over was hard to hear what he was saying because it was being echoed. My suggestion is to make it sound like he is on a radio saying that. it would have had a more erie effect. also adding a part where he says "run" and the echoe melts down. as if it were on a tape and the tape player suddenly slowing down rapidly because of a power loss.
but thats just my advice.
If you ever remi it in fruity loops let me have a zipped up version of the song and maybe we could do a mix. I'll add some of my style to your song make it sound a bit more derived from the mists of hell bro.
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