The piano thing as the melody stunk...
Work on your Drum skills. the bassline doesn't fit with the song and the drum loop needs work.
The piano thing as the melody stunk...
Work on your Drum skills. the bassline doesn't fit with the song and the drum loop needs work.
Add some ambience to the bass line
You have an overall good track however the Bassline could use some ambience in it. (reeverb) and instead of keeping it the same beat for the entire track make a second drumloop. also use a different vox rather than the youknowwhat! sample in FL Studio. do a search for a sample of a woman screaming in joy.
Encode this at a higher bit rate-
Then I will believe you made this.... It has a nice bassline but it sounds like something I heard on the radio 4 years ago on 106.3. I hope you didn't steal someones artwork.
Are you from usa ?
im not so i can say ive done it mysel because i did it out of nothing i just have some program with witch i do some rythms and thn i put them together. Its totally done by me, respect this or go crying.
Keep it coming!
These are better than most... I hope you created them yourself though...
Hah, of course I did. I wouldn't submit things I didn't make myself.
Good work!
You aren't the only one in here who can make good drumloops. Check out some of my loops if you would like a challenge. Don't quit making good loops.
Aite, I'll check out your stuff. Not nessecarily meaning I'll drop a review though... depends if I'm too lazy.
Don't give up.
Adding to a single rift isn't any good. Change it a bit instead of dubbing the melodies over each other.
The scratches are good but thats the only thing in this song I found very creative.
Also try to change up the beat once every 16 bars or so.
Keep mixing!
The first few seconds confused me as to what the beat was. after listening to the entire song I would have to say this would do good in a club. Maybe we all oughta make one big project. What do you use? FLS? that seems to be the most popular music device everyone on here uses.
I make new music every other day where I'm at. there aint nothing else to do. I could produce an entire Album of concept music in a matter of days.
Don't lose your interest in music.
With the few seconds of the beat I wanted to have no definate beat but have the beat merge nicely with the effects. Kinda changed it up in my head since the beat would be used enough in the song but I do see where your coming from. I use FLS cause of it's ability to gather sounds from anywhere and use them in your song! I didn't plan on this taking this long but it came out this long cause of my higher standards for my music. Pushing yourself is the best way to make a song. Making concept music is one of the techniques I use as well. I have so many projects with random beats and melodies I was messing around with one time. Some days you got it some days you dont and on those days I refer back to what I have done for inspiration :P I wont loose my interest in music but one day I gotta set back out and do my animation again :( Anamation is what I set out to do in college but shoot, animation needs music eh? Where else can I get royaly free music that goes to how I like it? hehe!
~Red 7
Nice!
Nice remix... I heard the other version... this one sounds nice.
I am currently working on a few new tracks myself.... check around my page some time and tell me what you think!
yea sure cool ty for reveiw ye ail chek ur stuff also
Please get better at Fruity Loops....
It sounds like you are using Fruity Loops 3 to make your music.... get an update! i'm not saying use a P2P program to get the new fruity loops I'm just saying get it. Also take a tour around my audio page to get some ideas for drum loops and over all song content. I'll give you a cookie if you vote on all of my submissions. (click my user name then click Audio submitted. and click on GuilmonX-00002)
How exactly are you going to give me a cookie?
Actually I have Fruity Loops 7 I think but its a free trial. I'll make an awesome one soon
you stole my kick beat! jp....
Your kick beat sounds like mine... only with an added Bump-bump on the second part....
I guess a little word of advice... use a different sample than that akward organ sounding piano thing. if you have say a guitar try playing it on your guitar.
oh and if you were wondering which song I made earlier it was GuilmonX-00002
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