Yes. Snares need a bit of tweaking to sound "in tune with it." otherwise this is one track that is truly different. I like the bass being simple.
Yes. Snares need a bit of tweaking to sound "in tune with it." otherwise this is one track that is truly different. I like the bass being simple.
Thank you kindly sir. Glad you enjoyed it, and I'll take that into consideration when I go over it again for final release.
Rock on groovy bro.
EDIT: Reuploaded the final version so the snares are fixed.
Reminds me of .hack//Mutation when you finally get to the sky city.... forget the name of the "server" in the game but it sounds like it.
Never heard of .hack//Mutation, is it a MMORPG?
Again?
keep em coming bro.
Ey man keep it up!
I liked the song. But the reverb on it I think is a bit too strong. I like a clear sound like the guitar is right next to my ear. I think the reverb would work good with highlights.
I just have to heart this song now...
I do have a guilty pleasure of enjoying reverb a li`l too much. It's so dreamy to me; I would definitely use it more "sparingly" if I knew how to highlight parts, because that does sound like an awesome idea haha. But this was a spur of the moment thing. So maybe once I refine it. =]
Thank you SO much for the review.
=]
-ry
Needs a melody.... Nice harmony though...
This song needs a Melody. Your harmony is nicely setup but without a melody the song just seems so..... boring. At first I thought I was going to love this song. But change it up bro. I know its amnesia but people who actually suffer from it get carried away with new things... they don't think the same thing for more than a few seconds... So make the song like Amnesia.... Like start it out like you did but have it go through the variances real quick... Then add a new melody and quite possibly change the main instruments to something else so.... when we are listening we can't tell what part of your song we like the most until its over....
Thanks for the review!
I'll take your suggestions into consideration, I agree with you. I have a TON of melodies/harmonies/anthems in my head, I'm just working on making them flow together properly and to up my production quality (more instruments etc. like you said). This is my first (released) song, and I intend for the next one to surpass this one in all areas :P.
Just a quick word....
Try to make several melodies instead of only having just one. It is a nice little piano lick.... but try making a couple of variances. Not just in the octave but in the scales. Have an off beat bit. Instead of only 2 measures for the main melody try to make it 4 or 8 where it isn't repeating. It has potential as many other songs do. But it depends on what you can make of it. I know the score is rather low but since it is only a WIP you have time to progress. Toward the end you had the idea.... but then it was short lived.
I like repetitive, yet gradual buildups, but you do have a point. I was already planning on using several different melodies for this. The end starts the change of melodies as you can see.
Thanks for the feedback =)
Wow just wow.... 0/10 HAHA just kidding... >>>
At first I thought it was gonna be a mess. Turned out to be something I actually enjoyed listening to. Though it is a remix of a video game song it is one I can actually listen to unlike most of them.
Never played that starfox game but you are one of my favorite artists besides X infinity zero who makes starfox remixes... You ought to hear his Cornerea remix!
Well thanks. This was really the only song I liked in their games... The music is good, but not music I could really get in to remixing. Yeah, I suppose since this song is really underrated, the melody isn't old and overused, which makes it nice to listen to. You should try that game, it's older, but I thought it was fun.
I think Land of the Forgotten is more suitable....
Land of no where? How can you be in two places if you aren't anywhere at all?
I think this song sounds like a place that used to be a chill place to hang around but then as time passed no one liked the area anymore... they found better places to be. Thats what I get from this song.
Cool! Land of the Forgotten is better, I'll try renaming it to that, or something else if that name is taken :P thanx for the review by the way and thanx to u I see a forgotten place too now everytime I listen to this :P, anyways thanx again :D
I'd like to know how you got that opening bass!
I like the song but could use a bit of beat trippin...
I dunno... just sounds like it is set up for a trippin song ya know?
I like the little high pitch alarm like thing. Sounds good with the mix.
Thanks :D the opening bass is a custom sytrus synth! aswell as all the guitarsynths!
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